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Post by CHuNMei on Dec 11, 2008 21:19:55 GMT -5
After 13 long years Ella returned to taiwan. Then she met christine, a young girl that captured his heart. She didn't expect to see Chun, his ex! Then she find out that it is the father of christine. how would she face the reality that she can never have chun again. She really love him up to now. if only her mother didn't intefere and if she was only brave to fight for her love may she is now living a happy life with Chun. Other artist Angela Zhang ang Calvin Chen
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Post by CHuNMei on Dec 11, 2008 21:20:31 GMT -5
1st Chapter!! it is only a flashback of ella.. Mrs.Chen: How there you do this to me ella?
Thats the first time she saw her mother really angry. She shouted as loud as she can do. She slapped ella on her face. Her mother's eyes were fierce. She could do nothing but to cry. there is'nt a part of her face that was not slapped. If Chun and her yaya Lisa did'nt interferre her mother will not stop hurting her. Ella's mother was very strict and she want ella to handle their business after she graduated college.
Mrs Chen: tell me it isn't true!
Ella: I-it's true... ella said while holding her face that was slapped by her mother.
Mrs Chen: It isn't true!! her mother said.
Ella: Its True Ma! her mother slapped her again.
Mrs. Chen: who's the father of that child? who!! her mother shouted.
She cleared her throat. then She look at Chun. She wanted to say something, But Chun interferre.Chun was ella's bodyguard.
Chun: Mrs. Chen?
Mrs Chen: Stay away from this! you have nothing to do with this so shut up! Get Out!!
Chun stay from where he was standing.
Mrs Chen: are you making me more mad Chun? Didn't you hear me? I said Get OUT!!!! her mother shouted once again. she saw the bitterness on her mother's eyes.
Chun: I love you daughter. I love Ella.
ella's mother turned pale.
Chun: Im the father of Ella's Baby.
Her mother become more angry! How can her only daughter fall in love with a poor guy! she almost did everything to make ella finish her studies. if only her husband was still alive.this would not happen. Thing really happened so fast!
AFTER 13 YEARS...
Finally after 13 years ella returned to taiwan. 13 years ago when she was still 19 years old. She fell in love with chun and got pregnant. her mother was really angry at that time. she decided to hide her on one of the islands they owned. She never saw Chun again after that. Ella gave birth with a beautiful baby girl. She really loves her daughter. kimberly was the only remembrance chun has left her. every time she will look on Kim's face she always remember chun and their sweet memories together. One day Kim get sick. Her mother brought KIm in the hospital. and She didn't allow Ella to go with them. They were brougt to the hospital by a helicopter because if they travel by the sea it will take them longer. Without Ella knowing, Her mother gave Kim to chun. When she come back to the island she told ella that Kim died because of many complication. Ella's world that time seems to be destroyed. How can she lost her baby that fast? because of sadness she felt that she doesnt want to live anymore. she obbey all her mother's order. She fly to America and continue her studies. After 13 long years she finally went home to taiwan.
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Post by CHuNMei on Dec 11, 2008 21:21:07 GMT -5
CHAPTER TWO
The past still hurt her. Mrs. Chen: You've come back! I really miss you.
Mrs. chen was sick now. She was weak and cannot walk. Ella stared at her mother sitting on a wheel chair. She hate her mother. Because of her the only gift that Chun left her was gone!
Mrs. Chen: Ella Please forgive me. im really sorry. Ella: I just want you to know that the reason why i came back is I want to see you suffering for all the things that you have done to me! without saying a word Ella turn back. Mrs. Chen: Ella please forgive me. But ella din't turned back. She went out of the room. When she had close the door she started to cry. She was really hurt to see her own mother suffering but she just can't forgive her, how can she forgive her? when she didn't listen to her 13 years ago.
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Ella had wish for many times already not to rain. the rain keeps on reminding her a lot of memories of Chun. They love the rain. It gives the two of them happiness. But now that Chun was gone the rain brings a lot of sadness to her. She really miss Chun a lot.
Hebe: ma'am? Ella: come in hebe. Hebe: have you made your decision to manage the company?
Hebe was her best friend. But Hebe's family face a crisis and their bussiness fall that's why Hebe didn't finish college. But because she is her best friend, sShe hired her as her secretary.
Ella: First let me clarify something. No ma'm or miss. Just call me Ella. that's the way you call you're bestfriend right? Hebe: Wifey? you are my boss now. I should call you ma'am or miss right? Ella:Sily!! for me youre still my bestfriend so stop calling me Ma'am okay? Hebe: Yes maam! oops! i mean Ella.
Ella laugh at hebe, She was still a comedian after what her family had gone through.
Ella: By the way, how was your promise to me? HEbe: Promise? Ella: you promise me that you would find him? how was CHun? is he married? still looking good? Does he have a child? what does he do now? Tell me Hebe. Hebe: im sorry Ella, But i can't find Chun anymore. their last address was already a commercial area, nobody knows where they live. Im really sorry!
Ella's Face become pale. Hebe: why are you still looking for him? Do you still love him? Ella: No! I just feel we have a lot to talked about. i nedd to explain a lot to him. it's a way of easing my burdens. may be i was just guilty up to now that's why im still sad. Plus i want him to know what happen to our baby, KImberly died. again there is sadness on Ella's face. If kimberly was just alive, She is now 13 years old. maybe she was happy because she have her daughter.
Hebe; i'm sorry Ella: don't be. just be sure that you will still continue looking for Chun. Hebe: sure! the detective ive hired is really good. wait does calvin know that you are still looking for Chun? Ella: He knows it! I never hide anything to him. my fiancee is really a good man, he really understand me. Hebe: good for you. I wish we can find chun soon. Ella: i really hope. Im going to church now. Hebe: let me go with you, Ella: no. there is no need i can manage. Hebe: are you sure? Ella: sure! Hebe: Okay. take care! Ella; i'll go ahead Hebe: see you later!
Ella brought her car. After 13 years she will visit again st. charise parish. where she and Chun made a promise that they will never be apart. But suddenly her car stop. She knows nothing in fixing it. what will she do? her cellphone run out of battery, how can she call hebe.?
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Post by CHuNMei on Dec 11, 2008 21:21:29 GMT -5
ITS CHAPTER 3!!! enjoy!! thanks for the comment! +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Ella was really furious that time! she cannot call hebe and she dont know anything about cars except drivin it, how can she leave that place. that place was really scary. a place of gangsters. St Charise parish is where Chun and Ella made their promise of love!
Ella: What should i do now? i dont want to stay here until it gets darker!
Suddenly a boy grab ella's bag!
Ella: snatcher!! my bag! please return my bag to me!!
she run as fast as she could but she just cant catch the snatcher. suddenly a young girl follow the snatcher and catch it. The little girls ability was really amazing. she fought the snatcher and locked him down.when their eyes meet a sudden happiness filled her. the same happiness when she first saw kimberly.
Girl: miss is this your bag?
Ella: yes, thank you. why can a pretty girl like you do tha?
Girl: do what miss?
Ella: catch that snatcher?
Girl: ow! hehehe my daddy teach me how to depend my self.
Ella: youre dad is really good. by the way what's your name?
Girl: Kristine.
Ella: kristine: what a beautiful name.
Kristine: Miss would you mind if i ask you something?
Ella: what is it?
Kristine: what are you doing here? its very dangerous here.
Ella: i was about to go in St. charise parish but suddenly my car stops and i dont know how to fix it.
Kristine: st. charise parish? thats our chruch! my daddy always bring me there.
Ella: really? maybe youre father is really great.
Kristine: ofcourse! i idolize him a lot! and he is handsome!
Ella: Really?
Kristine : yup. hey miss i can fix your car!
Ella: my name is Ella you can call me aunt ella. really you can fix my car?
Kristine: yah! my father also teach me how to fix cars. its our bussiness.
Then Kristine started to fix her car. to her surprise kristine fix it in just a snap.
Kristine: here. its done?
Ella: youre really great! maybe i can treat you to dinner as a way of thanking you for saving me today.
kristine: im sorry but my father told me not to go with stranger.
Ella: where's your dad? i will tell him that you would be going with me.
Kristine: he's in our shop.
Ella: oh. im not a bad person, if you like i can send you home too.
Kristine: are you sure?
Ella; sure! what now? are you coming with me?
Kristine: okay i'll come with you.
When kristine was about to go inside the cat someone call her.
MAn: Kristine! where are you going?
END OF CHAPTER 3!! hmm sorry foer that cliffhanger!! hehehehe who is that man?
read my other fanfics head over heels in love with a stranger and passionate revenge!!
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